Earlier today I published chapter three of my serial novel “Post Tenebras Lux”. It came to my attention that it had some serious need of editing. In my zeal for sharing the story I hit send a little too soon. One really should consistently call your main character by the same name throughout (not sure how I goofed that up). I have fixed the problems (insofar as I can tell) but I would be happy for further corrections if you see any inconsistencies or grammatical problems.
Thanks for having patience with me as I am new to writing fiction. Blessings.